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Animation

This is where you can leave <del>critique</del> praise for my comics.

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Animation

Postby JackCaliber on Wed Sep 02, 2009 11:28 am

Since Aniboom only allows 150 characters in the comments, I figured I'd post my full review here, as well as open discussion for everyone else.

First of all, love the background artwork. Rooster gag was nicely built up and well punchlined (although I probably would've added a little more "oomph" to the actual crow). Bunny slippers are funny, but could use a little squeak as he steps into them (maybe even with each subsequent step). Animals helping make breakfast was entertaining, and the pig summoning effects were priceless. The videogame scene gives Logan and Andrew a nice introduction, both for their powers and their personalities. Your map mishap introduces your power quite effectivley. Jordan's following rant is the best bit of character development in the cartoon, thanks to the thought bubbles displaying the various feelings towards him. Calculator gag rocked, and Mr. Freehery getting his check was the perfect punchline.

Does it have the potential to become a television series someday? Here's to hoping!
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